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Hundred Years Old Government Pilot Higher Secondary School Larkana
Sarmad Hussain
Feature
M.A Roll no 52

''Education is what remains after one has forgotten what one has learned in school''
In earlier 1919 a small town of Sindh named ''Larkana'' was blessed with a school named Pilot High
School but now Government Pilot Higher Secondary School Larkana that has furnished thousands of
folks from the very first day till present.
This school with an English alphabetical letter ''E'' shape surrounded by avenues and beautiful gardens is located in the center of Larkana city.
According to the current Principal of the school Mr. Allah Bakhsh Soomro: ''The E stands for England as the building was built later in 1926 by the British Colonialists then government'' but according to other sources E stands for education.
When I entered in the school to glimpse into the deep information of the school so I thought how students feel blessed to study in one of the most prestigious and esteemed schools of the city, also, this school has a lot of assets which makes them feel fortunate to be a part of it.
According to current principal Mr. Allah Bakhsh Soomro, the total area of the school measures about 24 acres which include E shape building, 52 wide classes and the classes are divided into 9 sections a, b, c, d, e, f, g, h, and i, one science hall for the experiments, one drawing hall for learning drawing, one library which has a variety of books, educational as well as technical books, Biology laboratory that is used for various biological experiments such as dissection of frogs, one computer lab, in the North-East of the school there is a huge auditorium hall where many events held throughout the year, one principal office
located near the main gate of the school which has three doors covering each side of the school and two
massive grounds for outdoor games one for Cricket and another for Hockey, three workshops, five lawns, one teacher's room, one clerk office, and parking area.
Approximately 6.5 to 7 thousand students are enrolled and are getting proper education under highly
qualified teachers.
In an earlier period, the school remained co-educational in which many female students got education
including Dr. Mrs. Ashraf Abbasi the first Deputy speaker of the National Assembly but after then it was changed and now it is only for boys.
Mr. D.V Mirchandani served for almost seven years as the first Headmaster of the school from 1 August 1919 to 2 October 1922.
The school was run by the British Government from the beginning of the school till 29 January 1948, 20 headmasters including D.V Mirchandani served in this tenure under the British Government and
according to the list, all of them were Non-Muslims, 21st Headmaster Mr. Fateh Muhammad Qureshi
commonly known as F.D Qureshi was the first Muslim and the only headmaster who has served for four times, firstly in January 30, 1948, to March 31, 1950, secondly in May 1, 1950, to June 17, 1950, then 3rd time in April 18, 1951, to July 22, 1953, and 4th and last time in November 27, 1953, to August 4, 1954.
According to current Vice Principal Mr. Ali Muzaffar Lahori who joined in 1989, the school has been
renamed thrice and has been upgraded for two times, firstly this school used to be a Government High
School in 1919 which was affiliated with Bombay University then it was changed into Government Pilot High Secondary School Larkana, it was first upgraded with various four workshops metal, wood,
electrical and typing in 1964 and then it was again renamed for the third time into Government Pilot
Higher Secondary School Larkana in 1994 by Benazir Bhutto who was the first lady prime minister, she
visited the school during an event organized by the school and she was impressed by the structure of
school building and she asked from school teachers about the level of the school and one of the teachers
replied to her that school level is till matric so she made an announcement for the upgrading of the school from high secondary school to higher secondary school, while the designation of headmaster upgraded into principal, at that time also computer lab was constructed with new class rooms renovation of the old school into modern school and new other vacancies for teachers than teaching staff increased from 71 to 150 and then for the second time it was upgraded into higher secondary school in 1994 on the directions of former Prime Minister Shaheed Muhtarma Benazir Bhutto.
Here are some well-known personalities who have studied from this school Nisar Ahmed Khuhro former speaker of Sindh Assembly and senior politician of Pakistan People's Party, Late Dr. Allama Khalid Mehmood Soomro former senator, Justice Ahmed Ali Shaikh current chief justice of Sindh, Haji Munawar Ali Abbasi former member of National Assembly and many other.

In 2019 the school celebrated its 100th anniversary and it was a one-week event in which singing, games, bookstalls, food stalls and other extra-curricular were done by the students and teachers as well, in this event many famous personalities participated including senior politician Nisar Ahmed Khuhro, Home Minister Sohail Anwar Siyal, Education Minister Sardar Shah, SSP Larkana Masood Ahmed
Bhangashand JUI Sindh President Allama Rashid Mehmood Soomro.
Moreover, many competitions held there i.e. drawing competitions among students and sports
competitions among the students of this school with the opponents from various schools throughout the
country and they arrange annual functions and parent-teacher meetings to discuss their children's progress and any kind of complaint.
Besides other facilities, there was a lack of facility of cold water but the current principal has provided
this facility to the students.
In the school along with education, they also teach technical education.
According to two former students of the school, they learned technical skills from the school like
electricians and carpenter further they said that they don’t have a need for a job because they can earn
money by using their technical skills.
Further Mr. Bilawal Hassan Tunio as he is one of the old students of the school, he told that now he is
working as an aeronautical engineer in PIA and today whatever he is just because of the Pilot school
because he was provided with the quality education that helped him to accomplish his dream.
The colossal and graceful building of the school is preserved and in good condition due to the proper
attention of the current administration, and we hope this school will complete another century by
providing quality education. 

KEY WORD: Pilot Higher Secondary School Larkana, Allah Bakhsh Soomro, Larkana,

The practical work is carried under supervision of Sohail Sangi, 

at Media and Communication Department, University of Sindh 

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Why not some old students were contacted? There is no interesting story to tell

Just information, that too from sitting officials

No personal observation Revised

Hundred Years Old Government Pilot Higher Secondary School Larkana

Sarmad Hussain

Feature

M.A Roll no 52  

                                                                                               

Education is what remains after one has forgotten what one has learned in school.

In earlier 1919 A small town of Sindh "Larkana" was blessed with a school named Pilot High School now Government Pilot Higher Secondary School that has furnished thousands of folks from the day very first till now This school with English Alphabetical word "E" shape building surrounded by avenues and beautiful gardens is located in the center of Larkana City. 

According to the current Principal, 0f The School Mr. Allah Bakhsh Soomro the E shape stands for the word England as the building was built later in 1926 by The British Colonialists then government. Mr. D.V Mirchandani served for almost seven years as the first Headmaster of the school in August 1, 1919, to October 2, 1922. The school was run by The British Government from the beginning of the school till January 29, 1948. 20 headmasters including D.V Mirchandani served in this tenure under the British Government and according to the list, all of them were non-Muslims 21st Headmaster Mr. Fateh Muhammad Qureshi commonly known as F.D Qureshi was the first Muslim and the only headmaster who has served four times in January 30, 1948, to March 31, 1950. And again in May 1, 1950, to June 17, 1950, then 3rd time on April 18, 1951, to July 22, 1953. And last and 4th time on November 27, 1953, to August 4, 1954.

When I entered the school to glimpse into the deep information of the school. I went to the principal office first, which was located near the main gate of the school, it had three doors covering each side of the school. The Principal warmly welcomed and briefed about the school and his services in beautifying and maintaining the environment of school there was no doubt that the school and the building were maintained with the struggles of current and former principals of the school. 

According to the principal Mr. Allah Bakhsh Soomro the total area of school measures about 24 acres which include the E shape building, 52 wide classes, one science hall for the experiments, one drawing hall for learning drawing and appear in the drawing competitions in which students from various schools take part. 

Including these; there is also a library that provides educational as well as technical books. The students are allowed to take the books to their home for almost a week if they want to read it furthermore, we cannot forget the Biology laboratory that was used for the various experiments including the surgical operation of frogs. In the North-East of the school, there is a huge auditorium hall which attracted me the most when I had a look outside the Principal Office. Entering the auditorium hall I impressed with the maintenance of the hall, many events are held there throughout the year. 

The 24 acres based school has two massive outdoor games grounds, one for Cricket and the other one for Football and Hockey. These games are played by the students of this school with opponents from various schools throughout the country. Approximately 6.5 to 7 thousand students are enrolled and are getting proper education under the highly qualified 135 teachers. The classes are divided into 9 sections a, b, c, d, e, f, g, h and i with at least 80-90 students in each class.

[[The principal was quite busy in his general schedule, that's why he referred me to the vice Principal Mr. Ali Muzaffar Lahori who joined in 1989 and was also a great person. He provided further information about the school, according to him the school has been renamed thrice and has been upgraded for two times first this school used to be government high school on 1919 only which was affiliated with Bombay University further it is changed into government pilot high secondary school Larkana, it was first upgraded with various four workshops metal, wood, electrical, and typing on 1964 but as also the third time it is named into government pilot higher secondary school Larkana on 1994 by Benazir Bhutto who was the first woman prime minister she visited school building during an event organized by the school she was impressed by the structure of school building she asked from school teachers about the level of school one of the teacher he replied to her that school level is till matric moreover, she announced for the upgrading of the school from high secondary school to higher secondary school, while the designation of headmaster upgraded into principal, at that time also computer lab was constructed with new class rooms renovation of the old school into modern school and new other vacancies for the teachers than teaching staff was increased from 71 to 150, and then for the second time it was upgraded into higher secondary school in 1994 on the directions of then Prime Minister Shaheed Muhtarma Benazir Bhutto. ]] Very long sentence

In the earlier period, the school remained coeducational in which many female students got education including Dr. Mrs. Ashraf Abbasi the first Deputy Speaker of the National Assembly. On the other hand, Nisar Ahmed Khuhro former speaker of Sindh Assembly & senior’s politician of Pakistan People’s Party, Late Dr. Allama Khalid Mehmood Soomro former senator, Justice Ahmed Ali Shaikh current chief justice of Sindh, Haji Munawar Ali Abbasi former Member of National Assembly and many other male students have been studied here. 

Vice-principal Mr. Ali Muzaffar Lahori told that back in 2019 the school celebrated its 100th anniversary he further told that it was a one-week event in which singing, games, bookstalls, food stalls and other extra-curricular activities were done by the students and teachers as well. In this event many famous persons participated including Senior Politician Nisar Ahmed Khuhro, Home Minister Sohail Anwer Siyal, Education Minister Sardar Shah, SSP Larkana Masood Ahmed Bhangash and JUI Sindh President Allama Rashid Mehmood Soomro. 

In the last, the vice Principal Mr. Ali Muzaffar Lahori told me that we administration have been continuously requesting the students of this school to make sure their attendance and concentrate on their studies and also make sure their parents' attendance in annual parents' meetings whenever we hold. Furthermore, he also invited the locals and the people across the country to come and visit such a historical, beautiful and well-maintained school. Then the vice-principal called one of his staff men and directed him to make me visit further spots of the school to make sure that whatever I’ve been told is the same. And it was as same as I was.

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Why to bracket proper noun?
Only first character of proper noun to be with cap not full word
These are also proper noun: world bank, national assembly, Sindh high court, Pakistan people’s party and also some more
Not in feature style, it in article style
Not reporting based, 
Information not written in interesting manner
No description of old school building and so also new one. 
Do not write date like this: 1.8.1919 rather should be August 1, 1919. 
There must be many stories, event regarding this school 
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                    Hundred years old Govt Pilot higher secondary School Larkana

Sarmad Hussain

Feature

M.A Roll no 52

There are many schools in and a Larkana Govt: pilot higher secondary school is one of them it is  located in Lahori Muhllah along with VIP Road Larkana Sindh, this was school built in 1926 by the British colonialists but it has been functioning since 1919. Means it is more than 100 years old.

Moreover the first principal was (D.V.MIRCHANDANI) in 1.8.1919 to 2.10.1922. At that time it was in British controlled authority but in 1.8.1919 to 29.1.1948 in this period of time were remains 20 principals those were non-Muslims, furthermore, As (F.D.QURESHI) was first Muslim who became principal of the Govt higher secondary pilot school for the  4 times, (Dr G.A JAFFRI) became principal 19.6.1950 to 4.1.1951 but as Also Only One time. Fateh Muhammad Qureshi, commonly known as F.D Qureshi was it’s first Muslim headmaster appointed in 1948, it was in 1964 that under a president directive it was selected as president's project and renamed as Govt pilot higher secondary School with the induction of four workshops (metal , wood, electrical and typing) aimed imparting technical education and skills to students also about technical education as well as till today All over the total principal quantity 64 which remains the principals in Govt: pilot school also from 1919 to 1994, 46 headmasters had been posted at the school before Karim Bakhsh Khuhro became its first principal, the school sources said.

 Moreover, the British era (E) shaped building denotes England that still stands high without any crake and scar, the land of the school spreads over 24 acres was donated by the late KHANBAHADUR AMEER ALI Lahori which now falls within the jurisdiction of UC-8.in 1994 the Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto upgraded it under the prime minister's program and its name was changed again to Govt: pilot higher secondary school.

In this school many job testing organizations they took test from the candidates from different cities according to point of view this is a benefit for youth and also for testing services.

Initially the school offered co-education, Veteran politician Dr Ashraf Abbasi who later became the first woman deputy speaker of the national assembly, had done her matriculation from this school in the days when Bombay university conducting examinations also chief justice of the Sindh high court Ahmad Ali A. Shaikh had been done his matriculation however, Begum Nusrat Bhutto also studied over here and world bank consultant Ali Nawaz Memon, senior supreme court advocate Asif Soomro, Ex-justice Mr. Dustageer Shahani, DIG of Sindh police Sanaullah Abbasi, a great politician of Pakistan people’s party Nisar Ahmad Khuhro they have studied and many more other personalities had studied over here.

Also pre-engineering disciplines were introduced and the post of Headmaster was upgraded to the status of principal. further in Govt higher secondary pilot school it has 52 classes as those classes are very long and huge area like hall, one science hall in which students do their scientific experiment, in biology laboratory students  do and learn to do operations of frogs with the help of their biology teachers, three workshops for technical education in these workshops students get technical knowledge likewise about carpenter, electrician as one of the famous and interesting saying by someone ( I had to again experience as I did not to have a technical education.

one separate there is a staffroom for  teachers  wear all teachers can take rest, and for the clerks has a separate office room for their office work, one library for the students in library variety of books are available as librarian make rule for those student they demand for the books which they want carry at their, home the rule is that any student can carry books but only at once on behalf of their student identity card which provided by the school administration, one drawing hall for the ART skills of students and also there competitions held0 among the students and many time others schools had participated, Moreover one auditorium hall which is used for debates, Quiz, declamation, spelling bee, dictation bee and also conferences, five lawns, 2 Big ground one is for football and another for cricket which is in the shape of stadium in cricket stadium at least at a time 300 to 400 person can sit, also Pilot school has own cricket ,football, hockey teams, as in football ground they also learn and play hockey, football and cricket.

In Pilot School the current quantity of the students is 7000, also 135 teachers in current time, that’s why it comes in the largest Govt schools of the Asia. However, 25 lower staff in current time.

In morning time they use band in assembly time which is their own band the name of their band is their band Pilot Band.

Also it has own scout organization and has parking for the students and separate parking for the teachers.

 There are 9 sections from A to I of each classes, and in each section the quantity of students is 100 to 120.

Many religious and cultural program are Bing celebrated like Holly, milad, also they celebrated Sindhi culture day topi ajrak, and Independence Day of Pakistan with the band and recently they celebrated 100 years anniversary program which was  continuously running for one week in that program many famous singer of the Asia came and  sung, like Abida Parveen, Marvi Sanam, other comedian programs were done, comedian Asghar Khoso, Ali Gull Mallah, Sohrab Soomro, and also books stall, science projects stall were included in this event many more as there many famous personalities came as chief-guest: politician Nisar Ahmad Khuhro, Suhail Anwer Siyal, SSP of Larkana Masaood Bhangush, Gusta President GM Abro also attend this event.

Now a day’s current headmaster is Allah Bux Soomro as he has added beauty to the school more than previous he built a conference hall, built police check post for the safety of students. As we know that now a days many schools of Pakistan have heard threats, further he arranged cold water tanks before it students used to buy a glass of cold water in 3 rupee, its reality not any joke but with the help of headmaster Sir Allah Bux Soomro but funding by Ali Nawaz Memon Director General at world bank. But as many constructions are stopped due to low budget Govt need to do properly funding for the further constructions.

 At the last I would like to mention a beautiful saying by our Prophet (seek knowledge from cradle to grave).

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Sarmad Hussain Mangi Article Eng 52 Revised

Revised
Noise pollution in Pakistan

Sarmad Hussain
2k20/MMC/52
English
As there are so many pollutions in Pakistan but one of them with the fast growing
pollution is noise pollution, Is also increase side by side as not only in urban
areas but also in the rural areas of Pakistan.
As we know the noise level is in balance from 72 to 86 DB, which is actually high
and risky for the citizens of selected areas. Moreover, Pollution has become a big
threat now a days it does not only cause the various diseases but also it's one of
the major reasons for the global warming. Pollution has many kinds and noise
pollution is one of them.
Continuously horns of vehicles, sounds of vehicles, loud speaker sounds are the
major reasons for creating the noise pollution.
A person can become ill and depressed if he continuously hears these noises.
Further, let me define the kinds of noise pollution, work place noise, transport
noise, motor engines noise, high volume, toys noise etc. As now a days these
noises are too much harmful for the human-being and also for the animals.
Moreover, in current days the major cities of the Pakistan like in Karachi, Lahore,
Sukkur, Islamabad, Rawalpindi, Quetta, and also other are suffering from noise
pollution.
One of the main reasons of noise pollution is traffic noise created by buses,
water tanker, auto-rickshaw, trucks and also the major noise of airport for those
people whose houses are near to airports and many more.
Now let’s take another example about noise pollution of high volume as we have
heard high volume through marriage lawns, in vehicles people hearing song in
high volume, and also sometimes on the roads and in markets they were doing
advertisement of their products through high volume with the help of speakers.
Another kind of pollution is motor engines this is too major kind of noise pollution
noise of high machineries in factories, and many time people becomes irritated
by those high engines motors which used in building construction.

As well as in Pakistan has another category of toys noise pollution as in many
cities of Pakistan has play lands and in these play lands there are huge cradles
with huge motors which creates too much noise.
In addition work place noise catch example of work place in offices people make
noise as like when poor people came for getting their cash in banks etc.
It not only affects the human beings but also all the living things including plants.
Recently the scientists have researched that the noise pollution also affects
plants and trees, they made some noises in front of them and finally found them
in rotten condition on the other hand the plants who were put into calm and
silence were still healthy and in better condition, so through this research they
came to know that noise pollution also destroys plants and animals.
Noise levels in Pakistan have reached in critical level with average noise values
of 76.5% bring recorded in Karachi, 74% in Lahore, 72.5% in Islamabad, in
Quetta 70% and 86% in Peshawar-as according to WHO, noise above 70db is
considered painful.
More than that, is founded that noise pollution health effect in Pakistan are the

physical and psychological health corollary of regular disclosure consistent

inflated sound levels. Inflated workplace or environmental noise can cause
hearing impairment tinnitus, ischemic, hypertension, heart diseases, annoyance
and also sleeping disturbance.
According to the Pakistan WHO’s criteria, noise levels in a residential area
should be 45db, 55db in commercial areas and 65 in industrial areas. Note that
these are the maximum levels and yet in our major cities, the value is at least 10-
20db above the criteria.
There are some ways to cut noise pollution from the country and those are
education and attention about the consequences of noise pollution in massive
scale through media, Residential areas, hospitals, schools, etc. should be build
up far away from city area, The old automobiles should be replaced with the new
ones, Downtrend of no horn zone in residential, hospital and school areas, The
outbreak of nuclear bombs during the war should be crestfallen and the
plantation of trees in public places.

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3-4 sentences for what is voice pollution, around 100 words about effects can be enough. Remaining should be about Pakistan

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Noise pollution in Pakistan:

Sarmad Hussain mangi

2k20/MMC/52

Article

https://www.conserve-energy-future.com/easy-and-practical-ways-to-reduce-noise-pollution.php

Noise pollution is displeasing human animal or machine created sound that disrupt the acting or balance of human or animal life.

Noise pollution refers to an undesirable sound or sound which generates horrible discomfort on the ears. It is measured in decibels (dB) and sound levels beyond 100 dB can cause permanent hearing loss. Noise pollution is a huge problem because it creates discomfort, interferes with an individual’s peace of mind and lessens one’s quality of life. For instance, noise can disrupt sleep and prevent one from getting a rejuvenating rest due to the high sound vibrations. The American journal of preventive medicine discovered just how much noisy traffic damages you hearing health. They found that this noise pollution disturbed 11% of the population during the day and 4% at night. Psychology today reports that the number one cues for hearing loss actually is not age, its noise.

Noise pollution cause by traffic noise, air craft noise from the industries noise from construction civil engineering works from rail roads, consumer product load speakers public address system fire crackers appliances booking animal poor urban planning and from other courses in Pakistan unfortunately there is on legislation to deal with the noise or emanating from railway engines air craft or airport or industrial or constriction activities.

[In Pakistan noise pollution increases day by day, especially in Karachi and Lahore city. At precut there are on national standards for prescribing noise limits for residential areas industrial areas commercial areas or solera zones.

Creation of an unnecessary noise has to be prohibited and should be punishable under law which is made by the Pakistan environmental protection agency.

https://www.dawn.com/news/738806/noise-standards-in-pakistan

 No national surrey has been conducted to assess the noise level in cites. However, random tests in different cites showed that the noise level in most of the areas was a high as 70 to 90 dB the governments should pass the noise pollution control Act to meat special Pakistan condition.]

Noise pollution effects on humans i.e. hearing problems cardiovascular issues, trouble communicating effects on wild life lack of concentration fatigues and headache. Noise pollution damages nervous system of animals attiring prey predator detection crates problem in navigation they become dangerous and attacking raise metabolism reduction of usable habitat death of certain species and  evolutionary problems noise pollution also effects on environment i.e. breakage of earth barriers poor quality of crop damages buildings bridges  and monuments and weakens the edifice of building.

Noise pollution causes high blood pressure heart attack cancer theme coughing wheezing deafness annoyance stress anxiety insomnia reduced lung development bronchitis and arteriosus sclerosis.

Auditory Effects: Noise can cause loss of auditory sensory cells. This is a major and most probable impact of noise. There may be many causes of hearing loss, but the main cause is the result of intense exposure to noise. The noise can affect the human ears in mainly three ways: it can deaden or damage the hearing capability instantaneously, it can severally reduce the sensitivity of ear for a limited period of time and return to the normal position within minutes, days or weeks depending upon the intensity of noise.

Non-Auditory Effects: Due to noise there may be a large number of physiological and psychological effects on human health and can act and interact with other stress factors. Non-auditory effects include communication interference, sleep interference, concentration interference, annoyance and loss of working efficiency. Medical investigations have proved that noise can cause physiological stresses like blood pressure and increase heartbeat rate. Noise also disturbs sleep and cause speech interference. Noise intensity above 80 dB (A) may increase the aggressive behavior of a human being.

According to research skrzypek, M kowalska, M Czech, E.M Niewia domska E and Zejda T.E (2017) Road traffic noise impacts on sleep disturbances and attention disorders amongst school children. Proper law should be enforced to check the misuse of loudspeakers and public announcement systems. Installation of noise barriers on the roads maintenance of machines, urban planning.

Depending upon the length of use. Fire-crackers and cap guns emit impulse noise that exceed even conservative standards for noise exposure.

Residential area. Hospitals, school, etc.…, should be constructed far away from city area.

 The old automobiles should be replaced with the new ones. Deceleration of no horn zone in residential, hospital and school areas. The explosion of nuclear bombs during the war should be discouraged. Plantation of trees in public places.